Saturday, June 19, 2010

The Devestation

   "Hurry! Run!" a ginger tabby yowled to her clanmates as they struggled to escape the roaring flames. Weakened by sickness, her clan wasnt able to outrun the deadly fire. Only a few lucky and strong warriors had made it through.
     She pushed on, aware of her clanmates behind her. At last she stopped. 
      "Rainshine?"She called out shakily to her deputy. "Here."he mottled gray tom padded behind her.
      "good."she breathed. "Are you okay Sunnystar?" a golden tabby tom padded up, worry in his eyes. He was old, and his muzzle was stained with white.
    "shes fine, Lionblaze."A white she-cat croaked from beside the old tom. "She has to be."

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  1. As Gazestar of Shadowclan bolted down the flaming territoty, the rest of the clan following, they ran into Thunderclan. They were a stagly group of warrirors, just like Shadowclan was.

    >Gazestar<

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  2. Sunnystar gazed at the leader of Shadowclan. "good to know youre here."She croaked, her throat sore from the smoke. She scented the air.
    "I smell WindClan!"She gasped.
    Sure enough, Shadowstar and his warriors were racing down the slope, mostly all of them, thanks to their running skills. Shadowstar led his cats up the the two clans.
    "Sunnystar!Gazestar! Where is RiverClan?"he demanded, his fur bristling, as usual.
    ~!Sunnystar/Shadowstar!~

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  3. "Right here!" a feebly cough sounded behind them, and Burningstar of Riverclan padded up to them.

    "Good, we're all here" he coughed.

    >Burningstar<

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  4. Sunnystar breathed a silent thanks to StarClan.
    "starClan wont help you here."A low voice growled, and Sunnystar whipped around to see an old grizzled gray tabby tom staring hard at her.
    She relaxed. "I know, Jayfeather."She sighed. "I just wish this hadnt happened."She gazed across the lake, the territory that used to belong to the clans.
    A RiverClan she-cat stepped up to Burningstar. "Are you okay? Were you hurt?"Se demanded.
    ~!Sunnystar/Thimblefern of RiverClan!~

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  5. Burningstar sighed. "Just a few burns, but nothing bad." he told his clan-mate.

    >Burningstar<

    Chirpkit, Gazestars only kit, rested at the leaders paws, her pelt covered in ash.

    >Chirpkit<

    "I agree" I grizzled, old, silver tabby she-cat spoke from thunderclan.

    >Ivypool<

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  6. Shadowstar looked among his clan-mates.
    "Finchfall?"he called anxiously.
    "Im okay."
    "Good."he sounded repeived.
    Sunnystar nodded at the she-cat. She turned to er clan, and counted the cats.
    "Five missing..."she murmured as a cough racked her body.
    ~!Shadow/Sunny!~

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  7. "And thier's a sickness. If only we had herbs!" Flowergaze, the medicine cat of Windclan, said.

    I have to remeber all that Kestrelflight taught me!

    >Flowergaze<

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  8. Shadowstar sighed. "we'll just have to find some, Flowergaze."he murmured quietly.
    Fadedeyes, the ShadowClan Medicine cat, stepped forward."We could go to the Moonpool?" he suggested.
    ~!Shadow/Faded!~

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  9. Flowergaze nodded. "I think that would be best." she said.

    >Flowergaze<

    Chirpkit coughed, wanting to run into the lake and just float there..... for lifetimes.

    >Chirpkit<

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  10. Echoripple sighed. "We can't, their are too many sick cats to leave!" Echoripple said, remembering her sister's kits, Amberpaw and Songkit, who both died. Amberpaw's body still lay near them. Both had died from the sickness.

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  12. Flowergaze sighed.

    >Flowergaze<

    Hazepaw of Riverclan flopped down, his eyes already glazing over.

    >Hazepaw<

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  13. Poppywing pushed Ripplekit along, the only surving kit of her sister's litter. "Moonpool might have been destroyed!"

    ~Poppywing

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  14. "It could've evaporated." Burningstar pointed out.

    >Burningstar<

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  15. Fadedeyes sighed. He couldnt see, and yet he could already tell that the Shadowclan deputy,, Sandybank, was going to die. When he felt her skin, it felt crisp and was flaky, and was bleeding in some spots.
    "this is for your own good."he murmured to her, and rolled two red, glossy berries into her mouth.
    ~!Faded!~

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  16. "the Moonpool is an underground spring! No mater what, its waters will not stop flowing!"Fadedeyes hissed, frustrated that he couldnt do anything to help.
    Sunnystar glanced at her warriors.
    "Rau=inshine, take warriors out and find as much prey as possible."she murmured.
    Shadowstar Narrowed his yellow eyes.
    "Gingerpelt, take as many warriors as possible and go with Rainshine." the gin ger tom nodded and weaved around his clanmates, looking for cats for the hunting patrol.
    ~!Faded/Shadow/Sunny!~

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  17. "What are we going to do?" Yowled Dawnpelt, a Shadowclan Elder.

    >Dawnpelt<

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  18. "We find a new home!" Breezepelt of WindClan flashed back.
    ~!Breeze!~

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  19. Ripplekit cried out in pain as he tumbled over, his golden fur ruffled. Poppywing hurried and picked him up "Ugh," he mewed "I want Heatherblossom!" he cried. Poppywing licked his head "I know, but she hunts with StarClan,"

    ~Ripplekit/Poppywing

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  20. "How do we Breezepelt!?" Heathertail mewed, a WindClan elder

    ~Heathertail

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  21. Swiftwing stood next to her sister, Sunnystar. "Both our homes are gone now, the forest and now the lake." she sighed Miserable to her sister, remebering the tales that Bramblestar had told her as a kit.

    >Swiftwing<

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  22. Breezepelt snarled at his denmate. "How should i know? Were not gonna survive that long anyway!" He pointedly turned his back on the surprised she-cat.
    ~!Breeze!~

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  23. "Its a shame Bramblestar isnt here."She meowed wistfully, echoing Swiftwings thoughts.
    ~!Sunny!~

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  24. Echoripple sighed again. Suddenly a cry burst through the clearing. Echoripple's sister burst in. "LEAFRIVER IS DEAD!" Silverdapple wailed, collapsing onto the ground, breathing shallow. Echoripple sighed. The deputy or RiverClan was dead.

    <>*Echoripple*<>

    Sagedusk collapsed onto the ground, a thin trail of blood coming out of her mouth as her eyes glazed.

    <>*Sagedusk*<>

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  25. Ivypool sighed, missing her sister. She remebered how Dovewing broke up the three many moons ago, and now JAyfeather and Lionblaze already looked on thier way to starclan.

    >Ivypool<

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  26. Poppywing felt tears well in her eyes "This can NOT be happening!" she pushed Ripplekit along. Sootpaw ran up to her "I'll take him" he stuttered. Poppywing nodded and ran along looking for cats to treat

    ~Poppywing

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  27. "someone....Help...me..'An agonized whisper came from farther down the slope, and a whit cat lay there. he knew no one could hear or help him, and that made his death slow and painful.
    ~!Whiteblaze!~

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  28. Stonefeather ran with her brother, Grassfire, she remembered what her father, Onestar, had told her many moons ago as she was an apprentice and he lost his last life 'I will always be there for you,' she wished he was here now

    ~Stonefeather

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  29. Grassfire stumbled he fell hard and did not get back up. "Go on Stonefeather! I-it was my time!" Stonefeather looked at her brother "First Lilyreed, now you! I wont leave you!"

    Grassfire growled "Go!" he eyes glazed and his breathing stopped Stonefeather pushed her nose into is fur then ran on leaving him

    ~Grassfire

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  30. Larkpaw followed Steadily behind his mentor, Flowergaze, checking all the cats.

    >Larkpaw of Windclan<

    Gazestar still remebered her sister, Frostwing, who was Blackstar's Daughter. And of course she was, too. She looked back At Frostwing's only kit, now made an appretice Flamepaw.

    >Gazestar of Shadowclan<

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  31. Sunnystar suddenly felt a pang in her stomach. She fell to the ground, writhing in pain.
    "Its back..."She whispered, and her bodu grew still. She woke with a gasp, ans still looked in pain.
    ~!sunny!~

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  32. Burningstar pressed his nose Leafriver's fur, his heart heavy.

    "Not another deputy..." he whispered, knowing Leafriver was his third one.

    >Burningstar<

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  33. Ripplekit swallowed he missed Treekit, his sister had always been fun...

    ~Ripplekit

    Stonefeather looked around "Moonkit! Splashkit! Where are you?" she cried calling for her kits. She saw Splashkit's cream pelt being carried by a ShadowClan warrior, Moonkit was nowhere to be found. Suddenly sh saw a silver kit barely breathing. She ran to the kit "NO!" she cried looking for a medicine cat to help Moonkit

    ~Stonefeather

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  34. Fadedeyes was by Moonkit in an instant. He checked the kits breathing, then pushed shredded coltsfoot coated with honey into his mouth, stroking his throat to make him swallow.
    !~1faded!~

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  35. Swiftwing sighed, remebering her litter of kits who had died in the fire.

    "Starclan, why are you letting this happen?" she whispered, looking at the smike filled sky.

    >SWiftwing<

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  36. Falconheart pressed his nose into Yellowbirch's cold fur. He tried to blink back tears for the loss of his only family, but he couldnt hide it.
    ~!Falcon!~

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  37. Larkpaw sighed with grief, seeing that yet another one of his clanmates had died of the sickness. It was Larchclaw, Shadowstar's nephew.

    >Larkpaw of Windclan<

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  38. Shadowstar raced over to Larchclaw, grief welling up inside his gaze. "Is there nothing we can do to stop this sickness?"he whispered.
    ~!Shadow!~

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  39. "We'll have to travel to find herbs for this." Flowergaze meowed, coming up behind Shadowstar. "But this isn't a sickness I've seen before.

    >Flowergaze of Windclan<

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  40. Silverdapple sighed, and her eyes glazed over. Echoripple yowled, coming up to her sister and pressing her nose into the cooling skin of her sister. Echoripple dragged her sister's body next to Amberpaw's. Echoripple sighed, coming up to Flowergaze.

    "Everyone is dying.... Where's Willowshine when I need her!" Echoripple wailed.

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  41. "Long gone. Like Kestrelflight." she whispered, remebering her mentor. "That's it! We have to go to the Moonpool! Or at least send our apprentices!" she said adruptly.

    >Flowergaze<

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  42. Burningstar collapsed, and became still, and then gasped as air rushed into his lungs. He huddered, knowing he lost a life.

    >Burningstar<

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  43. "Pebblepaw!" Echoripple called to her apprentice. The young gray she-cat came out, coughing. Echoripple sighed. "That doesn't work..." Echoripple groaned.

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  44. "Who needs the most help right now?"Treeleaf called out as loud as she could even though her throat was dry and in pain. She wanted to help others first.

    ~Treeleaf

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  46. Galewind came up from behind Treeleaf. "I'll help, too." he said, coughing,

    >Galewind<

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  47. Pebblepaw looked up.

    "What do you need?" Pebblepaw coughed.

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  48. Treeleaf inhaled and pain stung her lungs.. "Thanks."She managed to cough out to Galewind. She could hear the loud crackling of burning wood.She flattened her ears hoping to drown out the awful sounds.

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  49. Moonkit cried "Mother! Mother!" she coughed, her eyes glazed she coughed and her breathing stopped "NO!" Stonefeather yowled

    ~Moonkit

    Sootpaw coughed. "Ripplekit, y-you HAVE to be strong for me!" He inhaled and it hurt, he knew his time was short

    "PROMISE ME!" he yowled. Ripplekit nodded. Sootpaw smiled then Ripplekit fell from his mouth and his breathing slowed and stopped

    ~Sootpaw

    Poppywing sighed "My apprnetice died!" pain filled her voice for Brockenpaw "He had such potentiail!" she sobbed

    ~Poppywing

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  50. Fadedeyes lifted his chin. 'At least Lichenpaw is strong-for now.' He thought. "Lichenpaw!"he called, and the mottled tom padded over.
    "Grab the honey and coltfoot and give it to Treeleaf."he murmured. "Her voice sounds choked."
    ~!Fadedeyes!~

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  51. "We have to keep moving, the fire is catching up to us" Gazestar said, pointing to the ever-growing fire, coughing.

    >Gazestar<

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  52. Fadedeyes sniffed the air. His leader was right. the fire was close. He walked among his clanmates, checking all that were still alive, having to leave some due to thei injuries and sickness.
    "If anyone is sick, send them away!"he called. "Do not bring them with us!"
    Sunnystar stared in horror at Fadedeyes. She knew he was right, and she couldnt let her clan get sick.
    "Thunderclan! I must stay. I have thie sickness, and i do not wish for any of you to get sick."She lowered her head.
    "I am on my last life anytway."

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  53. Flowergaze sighed. "I must stay too, I've gotten the sickness as well" she said to her Windclan clanmates, coughing up a mouthful of blood out of that speech. "How will we go on without our Windclan medicne cat?" one cat whispered.

    "We still have Larkpaw! I know he isn't sick!" another one convinced.

    >Flowergaze<

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  54. Pain filled Stonefeather from all her losses, "Flowergaze..." she mewed coughing, but not from sickness, from the smoke filling the air

    ~Stonefeather

    Poppywing sat down "No! Sunnystar!" she cried, but she continued on helping a RiverClan apprentice get bk up after she had fallen.

    ~Poppywing

    Ripplekit stumbled along

    ~Ripplekit

    Heathertail sat down "I shall stay also, I am weak, I have the sickness and i cannot go on," The old elder mewed

    ~Heathertail;

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  55. "Who doesn't have the sickness but is still to weak to the point that they need help?" Treeleaf asked looking around at the other cats.

    ~Treeleaf

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  56. Pebblepaw sighed. "I must stay here then." Pebblepaw coughed.

    <>*Pebblepaw*<>

    Scorchpaw coughed up a mouthful of blood. "I must stay, too." the WindClan apprentice said. Leafpaw wailed, and longed to press her nose into her brothers fur, but the sickness was contagious.

    <>*Scorchpaw*Leafpaw*<>

    Echoripple looked sadly at her young apprentice. "May StarClan light your path..." Echoripple murmured to Pebblepaw. Echoripple turned away and pressed her chest to Burningstar's chest, counting up his live(s). (Del u want him 2 die?)

    <>*Echoripple*<>

    Sweetkit waved her tail regretfully at her dying mother and turned away, looking for another queen who wasn't sick.

    <>*Sweetkit*<>

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  57. Branchpaw of ThunderClan, Cloudfrost of WindClan and Tricklekit of RiverClan came from the smoke. "Good thing we made it here...." Cloudfrost coughed. "Is everything..... Alright?" Cloudfrost asked, knowing the answer would be bad. "Who else went to StarClan??"

    ~Cloudfrost~

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